VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

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Marcypawn

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Mar 16, 2021
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super great looking. but can we decrease the schlong size?
The dev have said they are gonna nerf the size
I wanted to provide an update on the discussions regarding Luna's penis size. Let me share my thoughts and decisions openly.

First, let me explain why I was quiet about this. The amount of complaints and feedback about Luna's size caught me by surprise. As a long-time fan of futa/dickgirl content, I hadn't anticipated it being an issue. When I saw your feedback, I needed time to think it over and hear what different people in the community had to say. I'm aware that it's a sensitive topic and that finding a solution that satisfies everyone may not be possible.

Luna's penis size is really important to the story I want to tell - it's necessary for portraying her dealing with funny and sexy situations because of it. While I value the feedback, making the penis a lot smaller by half is not something I'm willing to do. So, to make sure I made the right choice, I created some test renders and some animations with different penis sizes. This helped me see how future sex scenes would look.

After testing different sizes, I've decided to reduce Luna's penis size by approximately 20% (bringing it to about 80% of its original size). It still looks impressive, but not as large as before. I think this new size works better while keeping what makes Luna special. The new proportions work well both visually and narratively within the story. I'll implement these changes in the first full update of the game.

I understand that even with this modification, Luna's size may not suit everyone's tastes, but I believe this is the best middle ground that stays true to her design.

Thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope this clarifies my thought process and the actions I'm taking in response to your feedback. As always, I appreciate your support.
 

devilmanII

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Mar 2, 2021
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I wanted to provide an update on the discussions regarding Luna's penis size. Let me share my thoughts and decisions openly.

First, let me explain why I was quiet about this. The amount of complaints and feedback about Luna's size caught me by surprise. As a long-time fan of futa/dickgirl content, I hadn't anticipated it being an issue. When I saw your feedback, I needed time to think it over and hear what different people in the community had to say. I'm aware that it's a sensitive topic and that finding a solution that satisfies everyone may not be possible.

Luna's penis size is really important to the story I want to tell - it's necessary for portraying her dealing with funny and sexy situations because of it. While I value the feedback, making the penis a lot smaller by half is not something I'm willing to do. So, to make sure I made the right choice, I created some test renders and some animations with different penis sizes. This helped me see how future sex scenes would look.

After testing different sizes, I've decided to reduce Luna's penis size by approximately 20% (bringing it to about 80% of its original size). It still looks impressive, but not as large as before. I think this new size works better while keeping what makes Luna special. The new proportions work well both visually and narratively within the story. I'll implement these changes in the first full update of the game.

I understand that even with this modification, Luna's size may not suit everyone's tastes, but I believe this is the best middle ground that stays true to her design.

Thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope this clarifies my thought process and the actions I'm taking in response to your feedback. As always, I appreciate your support.
i would just like to say, i dont think you should change the size, i love a futa with a big schlong, and hers is just on the right side of massive.
Also, i just wanna point out that people are more prone to let their voices be heard about negative stuff than positive stuff, so there might be a LOT of people who are just fine with her dick size, and therefore just arent saying anything.
so before you change her dick size, may i suggest considering making a poll or something? get some actual quantifiable feedback?
 

Rexermus

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Nov 18, 2023
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i would just like to say, i dont think you should change the size, i love a futa with a big schlong, and hers is just on the right side of massive.
Also, i just wanna point out that people are more prone to let their voices be heard about negative stuff than positive stuff, so there might be a LOT of people who are just fine with her dick size, and therefore just arent saying anything.
so before you change her dick size, may i suggest considering making a poll or something? get some actual quantifiable feedback?
Lewtopia (unfortunately) reducing Luna's size has nothing to do with any peer pressure. It's purely technical, they couldn't make the current size work with any actual sex scenes so they're reducing it by 20%
 

Alley_Cat

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Jul 20, 2019
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Lewtopia (unfortunately) reducing Luna's size has nothing to do with any peer pressure. It's purely technical, they couldn't make the current size work with any actual sex scenes so they're reducing it by 20%
Speaking as someone with experience with Daz, posing scenes with a dick even half of Luna's size is time consuming. Because it's not just the dick, but the pussy you need to adjust as well. Sometimes the legs as well, depending on the thickness of the dick. Because proportions.

And there aren't many pussy assets that can accommodate a dick as large as Luna's was.

We haven't even seen what her new size looks like. Everyone, really, should just STFU about their personal preferences until we do.
 

Freesia11

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May 1, 2020
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Hey guys, Lewtopia here. I'm so happy to share my first game. It took all my effort and time to bring this game to life.

Each character was created from scratch with unique attributes, and the UI is custom-made. I'll do my best to improve every aspect of the game over time and would really appreciate constructive criticism—it will be a huge help along the way.

If you can't afford to support me via SubscribeStar, please consider leaving a review and comment.
Will this game have any relevant paths or choices? Basically I'm asking if this will be a VN or a kinetic novel.
 

-zoneout-

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Dec 7, 2018
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Even with 20% thats gonna be a massive dong. I really hope such a massive size doesnt look/feel weird in different situations. Other top games on here have the mc as medium to big which is perfectly fine to me. This is just massive.
 

omfgmule

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Aug 17, 2017
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i would just like to say, i dont think you should change the size, i love a futa with a big schlong, and hers is just on the right side of massive.
Also, i just wanna point out that people are more prone to let their voices be heard about negative stuff than positive stuff, so there might be a LOT of people who are just fine with her dick size, and therefore just arent saying anything.
so before you change her dick size, may i suggest considering making a poll or something? get some actual quantifiable feedback?
I really hope he doesn't go overboard with it too. Sadly those that complain the most will get their way, especially since they convinced him that if he doesn't shrink it he'll get barely any subscribers (Which is completely wrong)

Hopefully after he nerfs her size and the complainers keep whining, that he too gets tired of them and decides to accept that they simply aren't his target audience.
 

BaeScout83

Member
Nov 10, 2018
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Hey Lewtopia, I just played through a few different routes of your demo with my testing/proofreading glasses on, and didn't notice any typos. :cool: I only found a few grammar issues that I can DM to you, if you want.(y)

I liked what I saw so I joined your SubStar, and I'm tempted to upgrade after first/second regular release — if you can keep the updates flowing consistently. ;)

One thing I missed early on though, was the ability to change the MC's name, and maybe also last name.
Since you mention it's your first game, I'll take a chance and drop some unsolicited tips for you regarding naming and formatting of names when used in dialogue — I hope you can use them :D:

Input dialog for the script, asking the player to name MC (please note style input and style input_prompt doesn't inherit outlines etc. from regular dialogue/say style):
Code:
$ persistent.mcname = renpy.input("What is your name?\n(Luna, if left empty.)", length=20, allow="abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz-' ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ", default=persistent.mcname).strip() or "Luna"
$ renpy.save_persistent()
This would in turn require character definitions.rpy to be updated with:
default persistent.mcname = "Luna"
define ln = Character("[persistent.mcname]")


You can do the same with the family name or surname:
Code:
$ persistent.surname = renpy.input("What is your surname?\n(Collins, if left empty.)", length=25, allow="abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz-' ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ", default=persistent.surname).strip() or "Collins"
$ renpy.save_persistent()
… and for character definitions.rpy also add this:
default persistent.surname = "Collins"
define sur = Character("[persistent.surname]")

(I know it's a hack to use Character for the surname, but it's a quick way for you to use [sur] in the dialogue. Perhaps you can find a more propper way.)

The reason behind suggesting persistent names, is so they will also be used throughout any replay gallery you might add in the future.
You can of cause change the allow="" to include accented letters if your font supports it, or remove the apostrophe, dash, or space.
If you wish to force the first letter capitalised (and all the rest as lowercase), you can add .capitalize() just before .strip() in the input dialog.

With this established, you can have characters address them as Ms. [sur], or regularly as [ln], or shout MC's name with [ln!u], or if they are stuttering or cut off you can use [ln:.3] to only write the first 3 letters, or combine them with [ln:.3!u].
 
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DeBustNut

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Apr 29, 2022
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I'd say I'm up for big cocks so I hope the dev doesn't let this arguably stupid ass complain get to them. Let them do what they want with the character cause she's already perfect as hell, no need for changes god damnit.

Anyways looks like things are going well so cheers for you Lewtopia. Do what you want man cause this game is a masterpiece already
 

DeBustNut

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Apr 29, 2022
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I really hope he doesn't go overboard with it too. Sadly those that complain the most will get their way, especially since they convinced him that if he doesn't shrink it he'll get barely any subscribers (Which is completely wrong)

Hopefully after he nerfs her size and the complainers keep whining, that he too gets tired of them and decides to accept that they simply aren't his target audience.
I hate these people so much. We can't have nice things can we? Beside it's not that overly exaggerated either like what's wrong with her size really? There's plenty more bigger than her that I just can't wrap my head around the complains. Christ almighty god forbid somebody makes a FICTIONAL character with big cocks cause obviously we need them to be as realistic as possible right guys? Fuck them
 

DeBustNut

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Apr 29, 2022
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I wanted to provide an update on the discussions regarding Luna's penis size. Let me share my thoughts and decisions openly.

First, let me explain why I was quiet about this. The amount of complaints and feedback about Luna's size caught me by surprise. As a long-time fan of futa/dickgirl content, I hadn't anticipated it being an issue. When I saw your feedback, I needed time to think it over and hear what different people in the community had to say. I'm aware that it's a sensitive topic and that finding a solution that satisfies everyone may not be possible.

Luna's penis size is really important to the story I want to tell - it's necessary for portraying her dealing with funny and sexy situations because of it. While I value the feedback, making the penis a lot smaller by half is not something I'm willing to do. So, to make sure I made the right choice, I created some test renders and some animations with different penis sizes. This helped me see how future sex scenes would look.

After testing different sizes, I've decided to reduce Luna's penis size by approximately 20% (bringing it to about 80% of its original size). It still looks impressive, but not as large as before. I think this new size works better while keeping what makes Luna special. The new proportions work well both visually and narratively within the story. I'll implement these changes in the first full update of the game.

I understand that even with this modification, Luna's size may not suit everyone's tastes, but I believe this is the best middle ground that stays true to her design.

Thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope this clarifies my thought process and the actions I'm taking in response to your feedback. As always, I appreciate your support.
Lewtopia I suggest you think for yourself first before doing anything. Is shrinking her size really what you want? Remember this is your project after all and we don't have any say in it unless you approve them so I really hope you reconsider cause in my and others opinions she's alright and there's no reason to shrink her, hell I'd say it helps with her story too imo cause it justify why she would hate it cause of it's size and it would be more impactful for when she finally embraces it fully as it is.

Make your own story, don't let others sway you
 

Lynava

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Nov 1, 2020
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Lewtopia I suggest you think for yourself first before doing anything. Is shrinking her size really what you want? Remember this is your project after all and we don't have any say in it unless you approve them so I really hope you reconsider cause in my and others opinions she's alright and there's no reason to shrink her, hell I'd say it helps with her story too imo cause it justify why she would hate it cause of it's size and it would be more impactful for when she finally embraces it fully as it is.

Make your own story, don't let others sway you
The decision was made almost a month ago. There's no need to change anything.
 

Boehser Onkel

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Lewtopia I suggest you think for yourself first before doing anything. Is shrinking her size really what you want? Remember this is your project after all and we don't have any say in it unless you approve them so I really hope you reconsider cause in my and others opinions she's alright and there's no reason to shrink her, hell I'd say it helps with her story too imo cause it justify why she would hate it cause of it's size and it would be more impactful for when she finally embraces it fully as it is.

Make your own story, don't let others sway you
i always say - a dev should stick to his vision and dont change something because users want it

but in this case i posted my 2cents before
the size of the penis IS redicoulous
if you being objective on the matter :
alot of futa games struggle on the bottom or middle section of notoriety because of the size of the cocks
the whole futa thing is naturally about big cock , i get it
but making it a leg size ...

and i say it again - more ppl would play such games if the size of the cocks would are somewhat near realism
(see eruption imminent - done right)

the dev here has one of the cutiest futa - but ruined it , imo

its not like the ppl want to change the story - just a adjustment to the size

i still keep an eye on this game to see where it goes

have a nice one
 

Aihara653

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May 12, 2018
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i always say - a dev should stick to his vision and dont change something because users want it

but in this case i posted my 2cents before
the size of the penis IS redicoulous
if you being objective on the matter :
alot of futa games struggle on the bottom or middle section of notoriety because of the size of the cocks
the whole futa thing is naturally about big cock , i get it
but making it a leg size ...

and i say it again - more ppl would play such games if the size of the cocks would are somewhat near realism
(see eruption imminent - done right)

the dev here has one of the cutiest futa - but ruined it , imo

its not like the ppl want to change the story - just a adjustment to the size

i still keep an eye on this game to see where it goes

have a nice one
I understand your point but I strongly disagree. I don't think you're familiar with futa/dickgirl content. The proportions you describe as "leg-sized" are actually quite common and not considered as "ridiculous" in this genre - well-known creators like Steven Carson, Amazonium, and Nyl2 frequently use such proportions (sometimes even larger) in their work. If you're not familiar with these creators, I encourage you to look at their success - their earnings, follower counts, and how their audience likes the size how it is.

Personally, I think the current size (even with the 20% reduction the developer mentioned earlier) is appropriate and serves its intended purpose. We don't have many games with futa/trans protagonists, especially with these proportions, and I think it's valuable to have content that caters to different preferences rather than only realistic/tame sizes.
 

DeBustNut

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Apr 29, 2022
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The decision was made almost a month ago. There's no need to change anything.
Even if I'm late it's something that I think the dev should hear for the future. A lot for the times new devs would get intimidated by complains and it often led to the game hurting itself more than it did before, it's better that they hear this now than never cause I'm sick and tired of this happening all the time.

If the dev wants to make their game their way then so be it, don't harass them to change something they clearly don't want to. Opinions are opinions and I understand people have preferences but please word them better, we are all just suggesting the dev after all so don't pressure them to change their vision.

Let them make their own game
 
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DeBustNut

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i always say - a dev should stick to his vision and dont change something because users want it

but in this case i posted my 2cents before
the size of the penis IS redicoulous
if you being objective on the matter :
alot of futa games struggle on the bottom or middle section of notoriety because of the size of the cocks
the whole futa thing is naturally about big cock , i get it
but making it a leg size ...

and i say it again - more ppl would play such games if the size of the cocks would are somewhat near realism
(see eruption imminent - done right)

the dev here has one of the cutiest futa - but ruined it , imo

its not like the ppl want to change the story - just a adjustment to the size

i still keep an eye on this game to see where it goes

have a nice one
And there's something wrong with that?
If you're really being objective you wouldn't be complain about dick sizes in a FICTIONAL hentai game for Christ sake. Besides leg size? Are you blind? I'm sorry but this whole thing is just stupid.

Realism should be a theme not something mandatory. Some aspects can be different than real life and that's fine. Again this is a fiction after all and dick sizes should be the least important thing you should be worrying about.


God I'm tired of this shit, slander her size all you want I'm done arguing this with y'all.
Just stop pressuring the dev please
 
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